What strikes me about this sketch is how much better the pencils looked. During the inking, my pen frequently “jumped” around on the paper, causing some of the lines to end up in the wrong place (particularly the right (drawn on the left) eye and the left (drawn on the right) jaw).
Perhaps another recommendation to re-visit my arm position (or perhaps the pen; this was a Pilot V5, which is a pen I love for writing, but not as good as the Microns and other pens I normally use for drawing).
Regardless … keep going.
-the Centaur
Pictured: Porsche the Centaur, obviously.