Now that's better. Tilting the page, pencil roughs, and measurements of the face were critical here to getting the drawing better - though, even with careful roughs, I did that weird thing where one part of the face lines up and the other doesn't, causing a dent on the right side of the page when compared to the original below:
Still, it doesn't line up too terrible:
I see a couple of places that need work, particularly my measurement of jawlines. Or, looking more closely, picking which line to emphasize in the jawline.
On to another subject tomorrow ...
Drawing every day.
-the Centaur